Thursday, 25 October 2018

this week we are learning about  writing  a Descriptions. 




The girl had a neckles and a watch and the boy  had a watch too and both of them  loked very wored  and the police man looked  like he is going to trap them in the cell and go to catch or find the old man and  trap him too.

And  get the Treasure in the mayen Pyramid and have it all to him self ! and the police man has  the keys.


And  the police man is very suspish and very  mad and very wered.

3 comments:

  1. Hi my name is paul from my road school I really like your post about your description you have some interesting words and you have words that people can use.I can help you to do your and next time don't put and after a full stop.What does ramise look like in the picture and what is he wearing?.



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  2. It is me Healy and I am commenting on your blog. When I see this then, I say “wow this is really amazing”. I am so amazed from this. This is amazing because some people can use some information for theres like, the girl has a neckeles.









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  3. I think your blog is so interesting.

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